I would like honest opinions. (AGE 15 AND UP)?

Ooh, nice. :) Has a little sensuality without being overly done or too mature. Like just at the line of maturity. The only thing that kinda sticks out to me is the "and maybe in other places" line. It's like you started saying something else, but decided to play it safe and say that instead. Like it wasn't your first choice. I like it though. :)