Please rate this (part of my) short story /10, I'm an aspiring young writer?

Its well written but the question does come to my mind why does a ghost have to live in a cardboard box? And teh 460 lb werewolf thing makes it a little I dunno wierd. I guess for the dungeons and dragons or twilight crowd maybe it would be alright. Id rate it a 3 tho, but I get bored quick.